Founders sending paid traffic to a page that isn't converting
No metric reported. Murat Bock (AdLibrary) recommends starting with an audit, not a rewrite: give Claude the current page, the ad driving traffic and 10 to 20 customer reviews, and get a ranked list of issues. That list becomes the rewrite brief.
Bock's example of a continuity break: the ad promises 'Cut your Facebook CPL by 40% in 30 days' while the hero says 'Grow your business faster.'
You are a direct response conversion copywriter. I'll give you three inputs: 1. Our current landing page copy (full text) 2. The ad creative driving traffic to this page 3. 15 customer reviews with exact quotes Audit the landing page for: - Message continuity: does the hero H1/subhead echo the ad's hook and promise? - Specificity: where are vague claims that could be replaced with numbers or outcomes? - Missing objections: what concerns do the reviews reveal that the page doesn't address? - Social proof gaps: which proof elements from reviews are absent from the page? Output a numbered list of issues, ranked by conversion impact. Do not rewrite yet. [PASTE LANDING PAGE] [PASTE AD COPY] [PASTE REVIEWS]
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